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Ourgovernmentistryinghardtobuildanenergysavingsociety. Itissomebody'sdutytoworkhardandreachthisgoal.Besidesnoteverybodyhasreal?izedtheimportantofit.Takeourschoolforexample.Sometimewecanseethatlightsandcomputersarestillonafterclass.Somestudentsevenforgettoturnonthetapafterusingitandhavewaterrunallthetime.Ourpapersareprintedononlyonesidewhichcausingmuchwaste.It'stimewedidsomethingtoavoidthiskindofwaste.Firstlymakesurethatallthelightandotherelectricfacilitiesturnedoffwhenweleavetherooms.Trytoformthehabitofturningoffthetapimmediateaf?terusingit.What'smorepapersshouldbeprintedonbothsidesandreusedifpos?sible.
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改正后：Ourgovernmentistryinghardtobuildanenergysavingsociety. Itiseverybody'sdutytoworkhardandreachthisgoal.Howevernoteverybodyhasreal?izedtheimportanceofit.Takeourschoolforexample.Sometimeswecanseethatlightsandcomputersarestillonafterclass.Somestudentsevenforgettoturnoffthetapafterusingitandhavewaterrunningallthetime.Ourpapersareprintedononlyonesidecausesmuchwaste.It'stimewedidsomethingtoavoidthiskindofwaste.Firstlymakesurethatallthelightsandotherelectricfacilitiesturnedoffwhenweleavetherooms.Trytoformthehabitofturningoffthetapimmediatlyaf?terusingit.What'smorepapersshouldbeprintedonbothsidesandreusedifpos?sible.
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